playgirl88
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They say life is the best thing eva, so why does it feel like hell
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Post by playgirl88 on Apr 27, 2006 9:09:07 GMT
awww hunni, Ca$H that good. Di you write that for some one imparticular
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Post by Name$ - Ca$H on Apr 27, 2006 19:48:43 GMT
Nope jus was bored once a bit ago so wrote it
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analmunchkin
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The supreme overlord and galactic emperor of lactic entities.... EMPEROR MIKEY!!!!
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Post by analmunchkin on Apr 27, 2006 21:02:19 GMT
I have hosted the final draft of my play on my site so here's the download address: www.derek.mobstop.com/August.docIt isn't a typical play as in it tells a story, its meant to make you think about the way we perceive the world, each other and life. Of course that means lots of imagery and veyr little in the form of plot; ie little chance of winning the comp. But its what I wanted to do so there. I'm not happy with it tbh, its just like a trawl through a few of my fave plays and idols like Beckett with very little individuality. I'm proud of the fact that I finally wrote a play, but other than that I doubt Ill win the 15k, publishing deal and internship at the Royal Echange... was worth trying though lmao. I can win smaller prizes of £5k though if Im better, under 26, live in the northwest or show promise lol. I know it says its written by Sally Handro but that was my pseudonym for the competition since they didnt want to be biased if any famous people entered. I also wrote the lyrics to Aborted Goat INgestion, but that is NOTHING to be proud of haha.
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Post by [dannehpoot] on Apr 28, 2006 20:48:30 GMT
here is the poem i wrote....enjoy...most of you have red it, beks and sid havent...
Blood stained memory
is it you? Inside my mind long forgotten, a faint drizzle intoxicating familiarity, awaited for Waited for, too long, I waited for.
It is you inside my mind, I've missed your tears missed your seduction missed my addiction?
Never saw you since, since that time That time, I did something you were going to do to me. It kills you doesn't it, to know what I've done why don't you move? Move to my sound, to my sight.
The sight of you, I should bleed The sound of you, I should cry No, you should leave, you should be alone The way you planned
I pray for your soul I pray for its ultimate desolation I hope you die, just that little bit more That little bit more than I feel
You're just a memory Just something using me Just a nightmare I endure awake A blood stained memory
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analmunchkin
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The supreme overlord and galactic emperor of lactic entities.... EMPEROR MIKEY!!!!
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Post by analmunchkin on Apr 29, 2006 7:53:36 GMT
Lol I remember that one *sheds an emo tear*
Very positive ^^
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analmunchkin
Bronze Member #3
The supreme overlord and galactic emperor of lactic entities.... EMPEROR MIKEY!!!!
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Post by analmunchkin on Jun 1, 2006 16:05:14 GMT
I know I havent posted in ages, but Iv been revising/panicing about exams lol.
This came to me today, Im normally against feminism but still domestic abuse is fucked up and should stop. Its scary that 43% of women AGREE a man is justified in hitting his wife if she makes plans without first checking with him!
Warm Hearts and Cold Blood
What can I say, One voice amongst millions, What can I say that will be heard? Hundreds of women died for equal rights, Yet Two women die each week, Beaten by their partners, afraid to ask for help, Mutilated, Feeling worthless and degraded.
What can I say, One person amongst billions, What has not already been cried? Millions unite behind each cause yet none are ready to fight, The disease at the heart of society, The crime and our great plight, Why join someone as your true love, To destroy them in cold blood?
Of course its a second draft, so not fully refined, but I went for an awkward informal structure to help convey the uneasiness and ugliness of the subject matter. A bit of synechdoche for yas; the structure representing the whole topic lol.
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v1xy
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Post by v1xy on Jun 3, 2006 21:53:52 GMT
[shadow=purple,left,300] ooo thats good i feel i should say more than thats good but i don't no what to say you have silenced me, I'll get back to you. [/shadow]
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analmunchkin
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The supreme overlord and galactic emperor of lactic entities.... EMPEROR MIKEY!!!!
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Post by analmunchkin on Jun 4, 2006 0:09:23 GMT
Well if its silenced you that suggests..... I dunno I did ok? Lol Im not very good at gauging reactions etc.
Just remember 1 in 4 women is a victim of some form of domestic abuse at some point in their life so WATCH OUT FOR ARSEHOLES! And beat them when they sleep if you marry one before running off with all the money! mwahahahaha!
But seriously beating up your wife/gf is just wrong. As I said I hate the entire "feminist" ethos because it just makes people who dont agree women-hating bastards and those who agree bra-burning lesbians. Its far too confrontational, and generally degrades us men too much. Kinda like communism its a nice idea but they go about it too viciously. ANd tbh I think women are pretty equal nowadays anyway, I got VERY pissed off when I read Ann Oakley claiming that girls are disadvantaged at school these days when its proven that the current system favours girls over boys.... but thats feminists for you.
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